Catching the signal from one of her friends, Angela brushed her skirt, took a deep breath and walked towards where he was sitting. She seen the most beautiful looking god. He was as handsome as Prince Charming. She sat next to him giving a look that woukd only be recieved by someone you crush on. He smiled at her and held her hand. For a while they said nothing to eachother. Untill Mr.Prince Charming said, "Angela?".
"Yes?"
"Will you be my girlfriend?"
Her face started to turn rosy red. Where their hands met started to cry out sweat.
"Of course Brad I would absolutely love to be your girlfriend."
Monday, November 2, 2009
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3 comments:
I like how you said he was the most beautiful looking god it showed he really was an eye catcher!
I liked how you said things to describe how he looked.
You added very god similes and other literary devices in your story.
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